Mate, the beginning is fantastic, really gets you in a calm state of mind, but the thin little sine you bring in ruins the amazing sfx in my opinion. You should get rid of it, and use a scary piano instead, and when the beat comes in keep the fx going with the two, because when the beat comes in and the SFX fade, your track loses its fullness. You can let it fade at the break, but not this early! As the bass comes in, my point is strengthened, imagine what that bass would sound like with that SFX? It's a very nice bass, and I like the directness of the percs. The little pad in the background is very good also, keeps it driving.

Heres what you should do :

- Keep the SFX throughout with the bass, and then break with a pad and piano which is haunting.
- Maybe add one more loop to give the track a little more drive.
- Maybe you could bring the bass in after 17 bars (Yes that quick)
- GET RID of that sine at the start, it's really annoying and very unprofessional.

Otherwise, this is downloaded and well enjoyed.

Pulstate.

Now i'm not sure, but i listened to this in a pair of the finest headphones available, which i use to produce, and it sounded very well. It brought me back, as i think it has the 1999 / 2003 sound mixed into it, which is driving and intense.

You are getting very good mate, and i might take this to my next Gig/Radioshow because it's probably my favourite submission on NG i've heard.

Thanks for this mate.

Track is good, only complaint is the repetition, we are trying to save trance from it's criticism of being called Repetitive junk, and are constantly trying to find ways to make it less repetitive! Other than that, it's great. =)